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Part IV: Figurative Language: Personification, Simile, and Metaphor
Writers use figures of speech to breathe life into their writing. Figures of speech are actually comparisons, either direct or implied. There are three distinct figures of speech:
1. Personification involves giving human characteristics such as personality, intelligence, and emotions to animals or inanimate things, making it seem as if they speak, think, act, or feel like a person does.
2. A Simile is a figure of speech that directly compares two things that are seemingly not alike yet have some similar characteristic. A simile always uses the word like or as to make the comparison.
Example: Cold air rode freely among the savage hills, coming face to face with the people of Jolomk'u. (People ride freely, can be savage and have a face.)
Example: Soon the dark contours of the high mountains appeared like giants in the night . (The mountain peaks are compared to giants. Both are large and looming.)
3. A metaphor is a figure of speech that implies a comparison between two things that aren't normally considered to be alike. Unlike a simile, a metaphor does not use a comparing word such as like or as. Implied comparisons (metaphors) can be a verb, a noun, an adjective, or an adverb.
Example: It all began when the gods inscribed their great signs on the stelae of time. (The passage of time - or human history - is compared to a monument (stele) on which something is inscribed.)
Review Activity: "A Mayan Life" is replete with figurative language. Read the following sentences, some of which have multiple figures of speech, and identify each figure of speech as an example of personification, simile, or metaphor. Write capital P, S, or M respectively in the blank before each sentence. Use capital letters.
1. Jolomk'u was a colorful village, woven Tapestries are woven with colorful threads, which together can make up a beautiful work of art, just as the community of Jolomk'u comprises the sum of the lives, hopes, and dreams of the villagers. with the work of men and women, with their lives, illusions, and failures.
2. It seemed that Ajaw's hands had lost the ability to sculpt Ajaw was the "sculptor" of life, but they could no longer read the signs of the times engraved on indecipherable stelae, or monuments signifying the centuries of history. life
on indecipherable stelae.
3. The moon, like a great eye in the night,... came sailing over dark waves ... of sleepy The simile compares the moon to an eye looking down from the sky. The metaphor indirectly compares the turbulence of the clouds to the dark waves of the sea. "Sleepy" personifies the clouds, making them seem tired. clouds.
4. The moon shone its great gaze To gaze at is to look at something or someone for a long time, usually with intention. at Jolomk'u.
5. It tried to pull aside The moon tried to pull aside the storm clouds as one would intentionally pull aside curtains, and the landscape is sleeping; all is quiet. the storm clouds to cast its light
on the sleeping landscape.
6. The night closed the sheepfold and then opened the door to stars flying toward the great heights like thousands of fireflies The night acts "intentionally" in this example of personification and the simile compares the stars to thousands of fireflies..
7. The men lit their pine slivers in the huts, until the village was full of the spattering of smoking firebrands that made the crickets cry The figure of speech makes crickets respond as persons do to too much smoke. .
8. A chorus of dogs barked, intoning their protests against the unannounced strange rustling noises of the nawales, the local evil spirits, coming out to prowl A chorus of dogs is a metaphorical expression; the two following examples of personification attribute human behavior to dogs. over their realm.
9. Lotaxh was alone in the house, in a cold sweat, the drops As drops of rain may develop into a storm, so her initial pain is in anticipation of the birth pangs to come. of pain like an approaching
rainstorm.
10. Mekel ran like a deer You can sense his urgency in the simile. , jumping over the underbrush, taking shortcuts, racing over the paths.
11. A dog barked lazily A personal characteristic, laziness, is attributed to the dog in the adverbial metaphor. , accustomed to the midwife's numerous daily visitors.
12. Lotaxh, with strong arms like a grinding stone The simile suggests that Lotaxh's arms were as hard as a grinding stone, meaning firm and muscular. , grasped one of the pine stakes attached to one corner of the pole bed.
13. On one side the fire was like an eye The simile and the metaphor describe a fire that is flickering out slowly.
slowly shutting an ashen lid.
14. The chickens complained Chickens usually squawk , but in this tale they complain like people. under the pole bed because Lotaxh's moans kept them awake.
15. In the lulls between waves of pain Her birth Pangs are compared to waves of pain because they come
to intervene
in intervals she pondered, "My God, I hope that the fox's howl I heard this morning isn't a bad omen."
16. Unraveling like a skein of thread She kept thinking about the advice the village women were giving were giving / had givenhad given her. in her mind were the advice and instructions of the women she had spoken with regarding childbirth.
17. The laboring woman's strength was waning, When someone's strength wanes, the person has moremore / lessless strength. just like the dying flames.
18. A candle hanging from the sooty walls flickered, begging for more fuel, before it was swallowed up by the invading This example with three instances of personification gives the reader a sense of
resignation
urgency darkness.
19. Her pale face was like a tender avocado ![]()
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Note the color of this particular avocado leaf from Latin America. Her face most likely looked ashen like this and red from the strain of labor. leaf.
20. The steam rose from Mekel's body through the holes in his shirt like the vapors of the sweat bath If you have ever been overheated in a sauna, or run several miles in 90 degree heat, you can appreciate the simile. .
21. Specters with unpleasant faces The faces of these apparitions were unpleasant because they were scary scary / frightenedfrightened appeared out of the darkness.
22. Mekel hunkered down to listen to the night tiptoeing When people don't want to be heard or seen, they tiptoe. The simile then suggests that the brook trickled
to flow slowly in a thin stream noiselessly. ...
like the brook that ran beside his house.
23. A cry shattered the great silence, crashing against Mekel's pricked-up ears These metaphors create a sense of being startledstartled / relievedrelieved . .
24. The cry ran through the nerve centers The cry alerted everyone in the village. of all of Jolomk'u.
25. Ewul's firm hands were used to holding the naked first fruit The naked first fruit is a metaphor for the newborn. of the women of that region.
26. She formed the head, giving it a round shape like a lump of clay The fontanel, or soft spot of the baby's head is still malleable
able to be shaped or formed . .
27. She blew three breaths that came from the roots of Ewul's lungs, drawn from the root of time like a symbol ![]()
The Mayan child is rooted in his cultural heritage from the moment of birth. of the life and the inheritance of the ancestors.
28. The cry went snaking among the huts, and withdrew into distant time, searching out its origins ![]()
The common tie to the ancestors is the thread that holds the community together. in his first ancestor's initial cry of pain.
29. The others had settled down to sleep where they could, warming the stretch of cold earth under their ribs with the weight of their tiredness, like a daily rehearsal ![]()
The metaphor and the simile both suggest a difficult lifestyle and a familiarity with death. for death and intimate union with the earth.
30. Next to the fire he warmed his thoughts like swaddling clothes to wrap his firstborn ![]()
The Verb to swaddle comes from Middle English and means to wrap or envelop. Thoughts of his newborn son enveloped Mekel's mind. Being poor they swaddled their infant with whatever they had to wrap him in. .
31. A large firecracker had announced ![]()
The sound of the firecracker is the "announcement." The use of the verb "announced" is metaphorical. the birth.
32. Smiles blossomed on those faces,... teeth showing like white corn ![]()
The metaphor and the simile are very well chosen because flowers and corn would be a part of any Mayan celebration. , breaking out in the laughter of the collective joy.
The End!