World Folktales

Steps To Writing Well


The Topic Sentence:

A good topic sentence has three main characteristics:

  • A clear subject
  • A controlling idea
  • A strong action verb

Look for these characteristics in the sentences on the chart below. Note how the controlling idea limits the scope of the topic and controls its development.

Subject Predicate Controlling Idea
1. Many parents face challenges adopting an older child.
2. Misunderstandings often occur between parents and teenagers.
3. A school-aged child may have problems moving to a new neighborhood.
Practice expanding the three simple sentences above into complex and compound sentences. Which reads better? Evaluate the relative importance of each clause within the sentence to answer this question. If the information in one of the clauses has less importance, the complex sentence will be preferred.
1 a. (Complex sentence)
1 b. (Compound sentence)
2a. (Complex sentence)
2b. (Compound sentence)
3a. (Complex sentence)
3b. (Compound sentence)
 
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